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Beautifull redhead model taken last week with D700 24-70 Image
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This is an extremely nice portrait of a young woman! The quietness in the pose reflects the wonderful mood you wanted to put into this portrait.

I have, technically speaking, two questions to you. First one: wouldnot it be nicer if you would have cropped the image just a little, almost at the bottom of her hair? It would place the accent more on her hair and that is the (almost) important eye catcher in this image?
Socond one: why did you use a completely black background? To my opinion just a tiny bit of color in it would have added a tremendous depth to this image.

But, this doesnot take anything away from a lovely image; her parents (or her boyfriend) can be proud of her!
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A crop, as suggested, would look better imo.
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Agree to some extent about the crop, but the shape of the image needed to be in the A4 ratio for this shot.
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